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Ben drowned by RebekatheWolf74 Ben drowned by RebekatheWolf74
:iconbencryingplz:;D; im so proud of this yep so this was the number one voted creepypasta I should draw next is jeff the kill and so on from my list
plez tell me how I did:iconbennotimpressedplz: <-- lol
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It has potential and good qualities, but it has it's flaws as well.

First off, the first thing you notice is the hands. Hands have tone and some muscle definition, if not that. And, thumbs are not stubs on the side of the hand. The next thing is the arms. Arms have muscle tone as well, and don't forget fingers can't just be mittens. They have to look fluid and able to move. The concept itself has been done some, so it's not the most original thing in the world, and the lighting doesn't bode well either. The blood effects also aren't done well, they look more like silly string than blood. However, points for effort are given because it's clear it was put in. The potential is also really good as well, and the hair lighting is done to an adequate degree.

Overall, it needs some work. Better anatomy and consistent shading for one, but the potential is enough to make this somewhat bearable to look at. Keep improving!
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AgneseMariaCaruso Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing *0*
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RebekatheWolf74 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Digital Artist
thanks ^^
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AgneseMariaCaruso Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome X3
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RebekatheWolf74 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Digital Artist
thanks for the watch
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AgneseMariaCaruso Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome X3
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RebekatheWolf74 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Digital Artist
^^
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shadowsbestever Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Artist
OH MY GERD ITS BEN!!!!! Amazing bro Neko Emoji-05 (Rolling) 
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RebekatheWolf74 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014   Digital Artist
thanks ^^ and ben XD
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shadowsbestever Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Artist
BEN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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RebekatheWolf74 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014   Digital Artist
is awesome
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